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    Grimnir

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    Post by Grimnir Tue Mar 22, 2016 10:13 am

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    Magic Name Here: Reaper's Advocate
    Element Here: Shadow
    Primary/Secondary: Primary
    Character Specific/Non-Character Specific Character Specific - Only those who have made a pact with the Grim Reaper for this magic can obtain it.
    Offensive/Defensive/Supportive/Mixed: Mixed Offense and Defense

    Reaper's Advocate IdcNoDK
    A derivative of maker magic using the green and black flames wielded by the Grim Reaper himself the user of this magic creates weaponry and shields based off the hourglass, scythe, and mantle of the Grim Reaper as well as create attacks that look like ghosts and wraiths that drain magical energy from their enemies leaving them weak and defenseless.

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    Reaper's Advocate 9nY0v5X
    Strong Against Water Magic/Wizards
    Some Spells Can Drain Opponent's Mana Weakening them
    Works well with ranged support magics

    Reaper's Advocate KWvO0iy
    Weak Against Light Magic
    Damage is Low for most spells In Comparison to Spells of equal rank
    Some spells exhibit higher mana costs than normal
    Weakness to Devil/Demon slayer magic



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    Post by Ami~ Fri Mar 25, 2016 12:12 am

    Hey there, Ami here and I will be grading your magic. Edits will be in my signature blue color. Now let's get started!
    Grimnir wrote:
    Reaper's Advocate IlBs0Ll


    Magic Name Here: Reaper's Advocate
    Element Here: Shadow
    Primary/Secondary: Primary
    Character Specific/Non-Character Specific Character Specific - Only those who have made a pact with the Grim Reaper for this magic can obtain it.
    Offensive/Defensive/Supportive/Mixed: 70% Offensive 30% Defensive We don't really need percent xD So may you simply just write Mixed and state its offensive and defensive?

    Reaper's Advocate IdcNoDK
    A derivative of maker magic using the green and black flames wielded by the Grim Reaper himself the user of this magic creates weaponry and shields based off the hourglass, scythe, and mantle of the Grim Reaper as well as create attacks that look like ghosts and wraiths that drain magical energy from their enemies leaving them weak and defenseless. Creatures that are considered to be undead or similar in make up would surely fear the extra damage coming from this magic to them. The extra damage thing can be considered a perk which currently isn't allowed. However in the future you may add that.

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    Reaper's Advocate 9nY0v5X
    Strong Against Water Magic/Wizards
    Intimidating to Some This is more of a flavor strength, more of a choice thing. Can you add a different strength?
    Some spell Weaken Opponents  How does it weaken opponents? 

    Reaper's Advocate KWvO0iy
    Weak Against Light Magic
    Damage is Low By low what do you mean? Does it deal less damage than normal?
    The defensive techniques are small in comparison to most others Explain what you mean by "small in comparison to others"
    Can intimidate some allies and clients making them uncooperative  Honestly this seems more like a flavor weakness, more of a choice thing. Can you add a different weakness?
    Some spells exhibit higher mana costs than normal Even if some spells exhibit higher mana cost you can't buff the spell even more. This is simply more of a choice, just a side note.


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    Post by Grimnir Fri Mar 25, 2016 7:03 am

    Bumping

    Edits have been made hopefully i fixed the errors I had.
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    Post by Ami~ Fri Mar 25, 2016 8:50 am

    Grimnir wrote:
    Reaper's Advocate IlBs0Ll


    Magic Name Here: Reaper's Advocate
    Element Here: Shadow
    Primary/Secondary: Primary
    Character Specific/Non-Character Specific Character Specific - Only those who have made a pact with the Grim Reaper for this magic can obtain it.
    Offensive/Defensive/Supportive/Mixed: Mixed Offense and Defense

    Reaper's Advocate IdcNoDK
    A derivative of maker magic using the green and black flames wielded by the Grim Reaper himself the user of this magic creates weaponry and shields based off the hourglass, scythe, and mantle of the Grim Reaper as well as create attacks that look like ghosts and wraiths that drain magical energy from their enemies leaving them weak and defenseless.

    Reaper's Advocate MMD53Gy

    D Rank- 2 perks
    C Rank- 3 perks
    B Rank - 4 perks
    A Rank - 5 perks
    S Rank - 6 perks
    L Rank - 7 perks
    X Rank - 9 perks
    Z Rank - 11 perks

    Reaper's Advocate 9nY0v5X
    Strong Against Water Magic/Wizards
    Some Spells Can Drain Opponent's Mana Weakening them
    Works well with ranged support magics

    Reaper's Advocate KWvO0iy
    Weak Against Light Magic
    Damage is Low for most spells In Comparison to Spells of equal rank
    Some spells exhibit higher mana costs than normal
    Weakness to Devil/Demon slayer magic



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    Post by Grimnir Fri Mar 25, 2016 8:57 am

    Bump Adjusted the cd and mana cost for sustained all should be in order
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    Post by Ami~ Fri Mar 25, 2016 11:36 pm

    I'm going to need numbers for the physical damage.

    Last edit by the way. After that you can be approved!
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    Post by Grimnir Sat Mar 26, 2016 8:08 am

    final bump added damage
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    Post by Ami~ Sat Mar 26, 2016 8:31 am

    Approved

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