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    Earth Dragon Slayer Magic

    Post by Edward D. Smith on Mon May 16, 2016 7:23 pm



    Magic Name Here: Earth Dragon Slayer Magic
    Element Here: Earth
    Primary/Secondary: Primary
    Character Specific/Non-Character Specific Non-Character Specific
    Offensive/Defensive/Supportive/Mixed: Offensive/Defensive
    Dragon slayer magic is a special type of lost magic that gives the user access to magic that can slay a dragon. This version is known as Earth Dragon Slayer magic which gives the user the ability to manipulate, transform and control the element of Earth. Edward uses this magic in both offensive, such as creating earth gauntlets or creating fissures, and defensive, such as creating an earth dome, transforming into the element or donning a suit of earth armor. As the user ranks up and gets stronger, the earth that he creates will become more durable.. As a Dragon Slayer, the user gains an advantage over elements of the same type, gaining the ability to eat the element.



    D Rank Perks:

    Dragon Senses:
    As a Dragon Slayer, the user's smelling range is increased by 10 meters.
    C Rank- 3 perks
    B Rank - 4 perks
    A Rank - 5 perks
    S Rank - 6 perks
    L Rank - 7 perks
    X Rank - 9 perks
    Z Rank - 11 perks



    • Dragon Slaying magic deals double damage to Lizard, Wyvern, and Dragon type opponents.


    • As an Earth Dragon Slayer, Edward is able to consume pure forms of Earth element.


    • Can resist a certain amount of Earth Damage depending on the rank difference.







    • As a Dragon Slayer, Edward cannot ride on any kind of vehicle without getting incredible motion sickness.


    • Takes a certain amount of extra  damage against elements stronger than Earth depending on rank difference.


    • Lacks any healing spells.

    • Some spells can be highly destructive, resulting in friendly fire.








    Earth Manipulation Radius Chart:

    D Rank: 5 meters
    C Rank: 10 meters
    B Rank: 15 meters
    A Rank: 20 meters
    S Rank: 30 meters
    L Rank: 50 meters
    X Rank: 75 meters
    Z Rank: 100 meters





    D-Rank:
    Name: Earth Dragon's Claws

    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: User's hands become coated in earth, creating earth gauntlets with the fingers sharpened like claws.

    Description: The user begins by building up magical energy into his hands. The user's hands then become coated in earth, with the earth around his nails sharping into claws. Each hand inflicts half of D rank damage.

    Extra: User's hand movement increases to 10 m/s. Duration: 1 post Cooldown: 2 posts.

    Name: Earth Dragon's Knee

    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive

    Range: 5 meters

    Appearance: Earth coated around one of the user's knees.

    Description: The user begins by focusing his magical energy into one of his knees. The magical energy then forms into earth. The user bends his magically enhanced knee before lunging towards the opponent, slamming his knee into the opponent's stomach, dealing D rank damage.

    Extra: Spell moves at 10 m/s. Duration: Instant Cooldown: 1 post

    Name: Earth Dragon's Wall

    Rank: D

    Type: Defensive

    Range: 3 meters in front of the user

    Appearance: Square shaped wall of Earth.

    Description: The user slams both of his hands on the ground creating a magic circle. The user then summons a square shaped wall of earth from the ground to defend against incoming attacks. Can withstand one D rank spell before breaking.

    Extra: The wall comes up at 10 m/s. Duration: 2 posts. Cooldown: 3 posts.

    Extra: N/A
    C-Rank:
    B-Rank:
    A-Rank:
    S-Rank:
    L-Rank:
    X-Rank:
    Z-Rank:

    Olympia

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    Re: Earth Dragon Slayer Magic

    Post by Olympia on Wed May 18, 2016 10:08 pm

    Hey there Edward, the name's Olympia (or Ami~) and I will be grading your app today. Corrections are in blue. Now let's get started
    @Edward D. Smith wrote:


    Magic Name Here: Earth Dragon Slayer Magic
    Element Here: Earth
    Primary/Secondary: Primary
    Character Specific/Non-Character Specific Non-Character Specific
    Offensive/Defensive/Supportive/Mixed: Offensive/Defensive
    Daichi, captain of the Earth Dragon King's Royal Knights, an Earth Dragon who is capable of turning into a human, has passed down his Earth Dragon magic to a young boy named Edward D. Smith, teaching him in the ways of the lost magic known as Dragon Slaying. This is fluff so I recommend you take it out Dragon slayer magic is a special type of lost magic that gives the user access to magic that can slay a dragon. This version is known as Earth Dragon Slayer magic which gives the user the ability to manipulate, transform and control the element of Earth. Edward uses this magic in both offensive, such as creating earth gauntlets or creating fissures, and defensive, such as creating an earth dome, transforming into the element or donning a suit of earth armor. As the user ranks up and gets stronger, the earth that he creates will become more durable.. As a Dragon Slayer, the user gains an advantage over elements of the same type, gaining the ability to eat the element.



    D Rank Perks:

    Dragon Senses:
    As a Dragon Slayer, the user has a 10% increased sense of smell, and hearing.This counts as 3 perks in one as you are buffing 3 different senses.
    Earth Manipulation:
    As being an Earth Mage, the user has the ability to manipulate the natural earth around him to make things such as a spike path of earth, or a prison of earth. What he can manipulate around him is limited to a certain range which can be described as a radius that will grow as the user ranks up. Unlike the earth magic he creates, the natural earth won't grow in durability as the user ranks up, staying at D rank durability. Costs the user 1 MP every time they use it. My main problem with this perk is that this can count as many spells in one. As long as you can't cause actually spell damage equal to your rank and your creations can be broken by a spell equal or higher to your rank this is ok.
    C Rank- 3 perks
    B Rank - 4 perks
    A Rank - 5 perks
    S Rank - 6 perks
    L Rank - 7 perks
    X Rank - 9 perks
    Z Rank - 11 perks



    • Dragon Slaying magic deals double damage to Lizard, Wyvern, and Dragon type opponents.


    • As an Earth Dragon Slayer, Edward is able to consume pure forms of Earth element.


    • Can resist a certain amount of Earth Damage depending on the rank difference.




    • Can't consume Earth elements created from Earth God and Demon Slayers.


    • As a Dragon Slayer, Edward cannot ride on any kind of vehicle without getting incredible motion sickness.


    • Takes a certain amount of extra  damage against elements stronger than Earth depending on rank difference.

    You need one more weakness to balance out the strengths


    Earth Durability Chart:

    D Rank: Stops 1 C rank, or 2 D rank spells
    C Rank: Stops 1 C, 2 D spells
    B Rank: Stops 1 B, 2 C, 4 D spells
    A Rank: Stops 1 A, 2 B, 4 C, 8 D spells
    S Rank: Stops 1 S, 2 A, 4 B, 8 C, 16 D spells
    L Rank:  Stops 1 L, 2 S, 4 A, 8 B, 16 C, 32 D spells
    X Rank: Stops 1 X, 2 L, 4 S, 8 A, 16 B, 32 C, 64 D spells
    Z Rank: Stops 1 Z, 2 X, 4 L, 8 S, 16 A, 32 B, 64 C, 128 D spells
    This is a perk as a D rank spell should be able to stop one D rank spell and that's all. Being an earth mage does not give you extra defensive purposes unless you list it as a spell

    Earth Manipulation Radius Chart:

    D Rank: 5 meters
    C Rank: 10 meters
    B Rank: 15 meters
    A Rank: 20 meters
    S Rank: 30 meters
    L Rank: 50 meters
    X Rank: 75 meters
    Z Rank: 100 meters
    Please simply follow the range rules that are already given





    D-Rank:
    Name: Earth Dragon's Claws

    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: User's hands become coated in earth, creating earth gauntlets with the fingers sharpened like claws.

    Description: The user begins by building up magical energy into his hands. The user's hands then become coated in earth, with the earth around his nails sharping into claws. Each hand inflicts half of D rank damage. Duration? Cooldown? Also I need the speed.

    Extra: N/A

    Name: Earth Dragon's Knee

    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive

    Range: 5 meters

    Appearance: Earth coated around one of the user's knees.

    Description: The user begins by focusing his magical energy into one of his knees. The magical energy then forms into earth. The user bends his magically enhanced knee before lunging towards the opponent, slamming his knee into the opponent's stomach, dealing D rank damage. Duration? Cooldown? Also I need the speed.


    Extra: N/A

    Name: Earth Dragon's Wall

    Rank: D

    Type: Defensive

    Range: 3 meters in front of the user

    Appearance: Square shaped wall of Earth.

    Description: The user slams both of his hands on the ground creating a magic circle. The user then summons a square shaped wall of earth from the ground to defend against incoming attacks. Duration? Cooldown? Also I need the range and the speed.


    Extra: N/A
    C-Rank:
    B-Rank:
    A-Rank:
    S-Rank:
    L-Rank:
    X-Rank:
    Z-Rank:

    Bump when edits have been made~



    Re: Earth Dragon Slayer Magic

    Post by Edward D. Smith on Wed May 18, 2016 10:50 pm

    Bump o:
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    Re: Earth Dragon Slayer Magic

    Post by Ami~ on Thu May 19, 2016 7:57 am

    @Edward D. Smith wrote:


    Magic Name Here: Earth Dragon Slayer Magic
    Element Here: Earth
    Primary/Secondary: Primary
    Character Specific/Non-Character Specific Non-Character Specific
    Offensive/Defensive/Supportive/Mixed: Offensive/Defensive
    Dragon slayer magic is a special type of lost magic that gives the user access to magic that can slay a dragon. This version is known as Earth Dragon Slayer magic which gives the user the ability to manipulate, transform and control the element of Earth. Edward uses this magic in both offensive, such as creating earth gauntlets or creating fissures, and defensive, such as creating an earth dome, transforming into the element or donning a suit of earth armor. As the user ranks up and gets stronger, the earth that he creates will become more durable.. As a Dragon Slayer, the user gains an advantage over elements of the same type, gaining the ability to eat the element.



    D Rank Perks:

    Dragon Senses:
    As a Dragon Slayer, the user has a 10% increased sense of smell. You may have a D rank smelling buff which allows you to smell up to 10 meters
    Earth Manipulation:
    As being an Earth Mage, the user has the ability to manipulate the natural earth around him to make things such as a spike path of earth, or a prison of earth. What he can manipulate around him is limited to a certain range which can be described as a radius that will grow as the user ranks up. Unlike the earth magic he creates, the natural earth won't grow in durability as the user ranks up, staying at D rank durability. Costs the user 1 MP every time they use it. Attacks from this only do half of D rank damage. Can be destroyed by attacks equal or higher to the user's rank.I apologize as this is my fault for not being clearer. This is an offensive and defensive spell mashed up all into 1. When I said you cannot cause D rank spell damage or even half at all. At most you'll only be able to cause your rank's physical damage.
    C Rank- 3 perks
    B Rank - 4 perks
    A Rank - 5 perks
    S Rank - 6 perks
    L Rank - 7 perks
    X Rank - 9 perks
    Z Rank - 11 perks



    • Dragon Slaying magic deals double damage to Lizard, Wyvern, and Dragon type opponents.


    • As an Earth Dragon Slayer, Edward is able to consume pure forms of Earth element.


    • Can resist a certain amount of Earth Damage depending on the rank difference.




    • Can't consume Earth elements created from Earth God and Demon Slayers.


    • As a Dragon Slayer, Edward cannot ride on any kind of vehicle without getting incredible motion sickness.


    • Takes a certain amount of extra  damage against elements stronger than Earth depending on rank difference.


    • Cannot consume any Earth element that is mixed with any other element.





    Earth Manipulation Radius Chart:

    D Rank: 5 meters
    C Rank: 10 meters
    B Rank: 15 meters
    A Rank: 20 meters
    S Rank: 30 meters
    L Rank: 50 meters
    X Rank: 75 meters
    Z Rank: 100 meters





    D-Rank:
    Name: Earth Dragon's Claws

    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: User's hands become coated in earth, creating earth gauntlets with the fingers sharpened like claws.

    Description: The user begins by building up magical energy into his hands. The user's hands then become coated in earth, with the earth around his nails sharping into claws. Each hand inflicts half of D rank damage.

    Extra: User's hand movement increases to 10 m/s. Duration: 2 posts Cooldown: 3 posts. Remember you can only cause D rank damage in total per post as you can simply spam attacks if not and cause massive damage

    Name: Earth Dragon's Knee

    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive

    Range: 5 meters

    Appearance: Earth coated around one of the user's knees.

    Description: The user begins by focusing his magical energy into one of his knees. The magical energy then forms into earth. The user bends his magically enhanced knee before lunging towards the opponent, slamming his knee into the opponent's stomach, dealing D rank damage.

    Extra: Spell moves at 10 m/s. Duration: Instant Cooldown: 1 post

    Name: Earth Dragon's Wall

    Rank: D

    Type: Defensive

    Range: 3 meters in front of the user

    Appearance: Square shaped wall of Earth.

    Description: The user slams both of his hands on the ground creating a magic circle. The user then summons a square shaped wall of earth from the ground to defend against incoming attacks. How much damage can it take before it breaks?

    Extra: The wall comes up at 10 m/s. Duration: 2 posts. Cooldown: 3 posts.

    Extra: N/A
    C-Rank:
    B-Rank:
    A-Rank:
    S-Rank:
    L-Rank:
    X-Rank:
    Z-Rank:

    Re: Earth Dragon Slayer Magic

    Post by Edward D. Smith on Thu May 19, 2016 10:04 am

    Bump.

    Olympia

    Posts : 19

    Re: Earth Dragon Slayer Magic

    Post by Olympia on Thu May 19, 2016 8:39 pm



    Magic Name Here: Earth Dragon Slayer Magic
    Element Here: Earth
    Primary/Secondary: Primary
    Character Specific/Non-Character Specific Non-Character Specific
    Offensive/Defensive/Supportive/Mixed: Offensive/Defensive
    Dragon slayer magic is a special type of lost magic that gives the user access to magic that can slay a dragon. This version is known as Earth Dragon Slayer magic which gives the user the ability to manipulate, transform and control the element of Earth. Edward uses this magic in both offensive, such as creating earth gauntlets or creating fissures, and defensive, such as creating an earth dome, transforming into the element or donning a suit of earth armor. As the user ranks up and gets stronger, the earth that he creates will become more durable.. As a Dragon Slayer, the user gains an advantage over elements of the same type, gaining the ability to eat the element.



    D Rank Perks:

    Dragon Senses:
    As a Dragon Slayer, the user's smelling range is increased by 10 meters.
    Earth Manipulation Defense:
    As being an Earth Mage, the user has the ability to manipulate the natural earth around him to make things such as a wall , or a prison of earth. What he can manipulate around him is limited to a certain range which can be described as a radius that will grow as the user ranks up. Unlike the earth magic he creates, the natural earth won't grow in durability as the user ranks up, staying at half of D rank durability. Costs the user 1 MP every time they use it. Can only stop D rank basic attacks and D rank spells that only do half or less than actual D rank spell attacks. Again, the fact it can stop any attacks or cause more than D rank physical damage is a no, no. Please edit accordingly.
    C Rank- 3 perks
    B Rank - 4 perks
    A Rank - 5 perks
    S Rank - 6 perks
    L Rank - 7 perks
    X Rank - 9 perks
    Z Rank - 11 perks



    • Dragon Slaying magic deals double damage to Lizard, Wyvern, and Dragon type opponents.


    • As an Earth Dragon Slayer, Edward is able to consume pure forms of Earth element. Unfortunately after talking to the staff this is a perk.


    • Can resist a certain amount of Earth Damage depending on the rank difference.




    • Can't consume Earth elements created from Earth God and Demon Slayers. Again this is more of a downfall of a perk rather than a magic weakness


    • As a Dragon Slayer, Edward cannot ride on any kind of vehicle without getting incredible motion sickness.


    • Takes a certain amount of extra  damage against elements stronger than Earth depending on rank difference.


    • Cannot consume any Earth element that is mixed with any other element. See first weakness description





    Earth Manipulation Radius Chart:

    D Rank: 5 meters
    C Rank: 10 meters
    B Rank: 15 meters
    A Rank: 20 meters
    S Rank: 30 meters
    L Rank: 50 meters
    X Rank: 75 meters
    Z Rank: 100 meters





    D-Rank:
    Name: Earth Dragon's Claws

    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive

    Range: N/A

    Appearance: User's hands become coated in earth, creating earth gauntlets with the fingers sharpened like claws.

    Description: The user begins by building up magical energy into his hands. The user's hands then become coated in earth, with the earth around his nails sharping into claws. Each hand inflicts half of D rank damage.

    Extra: User's hand movement increases to 10 m/s. Duration: 1 post Cooldown: 2 posts.

    Name: Earth Dragon's Knee

    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive

    Range: 5 meters

    Appearance: Earth coated around one of the user's knees.

    Description: The user begins by focusing his magical energy into one of his knees. The magical energy then forms into earth. The user bends his magically enhanced knee before lunging towards the opponent, slamming his knee into the opponent's stomach, dealing D rank damage.

    Extra: Spell moves at 10 m/s. Duration: Instant Cooldown: 1 post

    Name: Earth Dragon's Wall

    Rank: D

    Type: Defensive

    Range: 3 meters in front of the user

    Appearance: Square shaped wall of Earth.

    Description: The user slams both of his hands on the ground creating a magic circle. The user then summons a square shaped wall of earth from the ground to defend against incoming attacks. Can withstand one D rank spell before breaking.

    Extra: The wall comes up at 10 m/s. Duration: 2 posts. Cooldown: 3 posts.

    Extra: N/A
    C-Rank:
    B-Rank:
    A-Rank:
    S-Rank:
    L-Rank:
    X-Rank:
    Z-Rank:



    Re: Earth Dragon Slayer Magic

    Post by Edward D. Smith on Sat May 21, 2016 4:36 pm

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    Re: Earth Dragon Slayer Magic

    Post by Ami~ on Sun May 22, 2016 6:45 am

    I'm going to say this once more as confirmation. Are you sure you only want one perk? You still have one more for your rank, it can be another enhanced sense or maybe even you can eat your element that is pure and equal to your rank and is not anothet slayer's. If not let's do one last edit hopefully

    As an Earth Dragon Slayer, Edward is able to consume pure forms of Earth element.

    Still a perk strength, replace this.

    Earth Dragon's Claw: I need you to state you can only cause D rank damage and is instant or else that will be considered as a buffing spell.

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