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    Post by Ray Ignazia Thu Mar 31, 2016 4:21 am

    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} IlBs0Ll


    Magic Name Here: Heaven God Slayer
    Element Here: Light
    Primary/Secondary: Primary
    Character Specific/Non-Character Specific Non-character specific. It is an ancient lost magic, which can either be learned from a turned god or a tome, or can be obtained through a lacrima.
    Offensive/Defensive/Supportive/Mixed: Mixed.


    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} IdcNoDK
    God Slayer Magic is a form of Ancient Spell in which the caster is able to attain the abilities of a "God", using a specific element as their type. The certain elemental type of God Slayer Magic can be conjured from the caster's body and be used for various purposes, mainly in combat. It is said that the original usage of this Magic was to slay "Gods". In addition, the color of each God Slayer's element has a black tint, regardless of what it may be.

    Light God Slayer Magic allows its user to transform the physiology of their body into that of a tainted archangel, allowing them to utilise a power that can be used to eradicate Gods. The light produced from this magic has a black tint to it, surrounding a bright interior. Consequently, this Magic allows the user to both produce and control this light from any part of their body, which can be used in both close and ranged combat, or in order to increase the mage's own effectiveness in battle. The user can also manipulate and control, to an extent, light from natural sources, and can eat any light in order to regain strength, except the light that his own magic produces, or that of this magic's counterpart, the Light Demon Slayer magic.

    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} MMD53Gy

    D Rank- 2 perks
    C Rank- 3 perks
    B Rank - 4 perks
    A Rank - 5 perks
    S Rank - 6 perks
    L Rank - 7 perks
    X Rank - 9 perks
    Z Rank - 11 perks

    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} 9nY0v5X

    • It is an extremely versatile magic, it's uses ranging from offensive, to even supplementary, as the mage chooses.
    • This form of magic is strong against darkness magic.
    • This magic allows the user to alter his physiology to that of an Archangel/God, and thus the user can eat "lower" forms of this element and is immune to this element of Light.


    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} KWvO0iy

    • The user cannot eat the Light generated by his own magic, or the light generated by a demon slayer.
    • This form of magic cannot be used for healing spells.
    • Light magic has an advantage against darkness magic at the cost of being weak to earth.
    • The caster cannot utilise light from sources beyond 10m radius of him, therefore it limits him at large ranges.


    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} DafVp4X


    D-Rank:
    C-Rank:
    B-Rank:
    A-Rank:
    S-Rank:
    L-Rank:
    X-Rank:
    Z-Rank:
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    Post by Ami~ Sat Apr 02, 2016 7:18 pm

    Hey there, Ami here and I will be grading your magic. Edits will be in
    this color. Let's get started.
    Ray Ignazia wrote:
    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} IlBs0Ll


    Magic Name Here: Heaven God Slayer
    Element Here: Light
    Primary/Secondary: Primary
    Character Specific/Non-Character Specific Non-character specific. It is an ancient lost magic, which can either be learned from a turned god or a tome, or can be obtained through a lacrima.
    Offensive/Defensive/Supportive/Mixed: Mixed.


    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} IdcNoDK
    God Slayer Magic is a form of Ancient Spell in which the caster is able to attain the abilities of a "God", using a specific element as their type. The certain elemental type of God Slayer Magic can be conjured from the caster's body and be used for various purposes, mainly in combat. It is said that the original usage of this Magic was to slay "Gods". In addition, the color of each God Slayer's element has a black tint, regardless of what it may be.

    Light God Slayer Magic allows its user to transform the physiology of their body into that of a tainted archangel, allowing them to utilise a power that can be used to eradicate Gods. The light produced from this magic has a black tint to it, surrounding a bright interior. Consequently, this Magic allows the user to both produce and control this light from any part of their body, which can be used in both close and ranged combat, or in order to increase the mage's own effectiveness in battle. The user can also manipulate and control, to an extent, light from natural sources, and can eat any light in order to regain strength, except the light that his own magic produces, or that of this magic's counterpart, the Light Demon Slayer magic.

    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} MMD53Gy

    D Rank- 2 perks
    C Rank- 3 perks
    B Rank - 4 perks
    A Rank - 5 perks
    S Rank - 6 perks
    L Rank - 7 perks
    X Rank - 9 perks
    Z Rank - 11 perks

    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} 9nY0v5X

    • It is an extremely versatile magic, it's uses ranging from offensive, to even supplementary, as the mage chooses.
    • This form of magic is strong against light magic/holy magic, and therefore is more effective when dealing with mages of such elemental affinities.
    • This magic allows the user to alter his physiology to that of an Archangel/God, and thus the user can eat "lower" forms of this element and is immune to this element of Light.


    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} KWvO0iy

    • The user cannot eat the Light generated by his own magic, or the light generated by a demon slayer.
    • This form of magic cannot be used for healing spells.
    • This magic has no other elemental advantages against other elements, and therefore the user does not have too many advantages when facing a mage not affiliated with light in any way. Light magic has an advantage against darkness magic at the cost of being weak to earth
    • The caster cannot utilise light from sources beyond 10m radius of him, therefore it limits him at large ranges.


    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} DafVp4X


    D-Rank:
    C-Rank:
    B-Rank:
    A-Rank:
    [spoiler=S-Rank][/7]
    L-Rank:
    X-Rank:
    Z-Rank:
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    Post by Ray Ignazia Sun Apr 03, 2016 3:42 am

    Okay so, I had written the duration/cooldown and speed for a couple of spells, which you seemed to have overlooked. I bolded them below for you, so that shouldn't be an issue. Most spells you've asked me to write a speed for are at a touch based range, so, even with a D ranked spell it'll be less than a second. IMO it doesn't need a speed since it's not a projectile, or the spell in effect is not leaving my character's body in any way, but yeah, please help me understand what exactly you need. Everything else is edited as you wanted.

    Ami~ wrote:Hey there, Ami here and I will be grading your magic. Edits will be in
    this color. Let's get started.
    Ray Ignazia wrote:
    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} IlBs0Ll


    Magic Name Here: Heaven God Slayer
    Element Here: Light
    Primary/Secondary: Primary
    Character Specific/Non-Character Specific Non-character specific. It is an ancient lost magic, which can either be learned from a turned god or a tome, or can be obtained through a lacrima.
    Offensive/Defensive/Supportive/Mixed: Mixed.


    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} IdcNoDK
    God Slayer Magic is a form of Ancient Spell in which the caster is able to attain the abilities of a "God", using a specific element as their type. The certain elemental type of God Slayer Magic can be conjured from the caster's body and be used for various purposes, mainly in combat. It is said that the original usage of this Magic was to slay "Gods". In addition, the color of each God Slayer's element has a black tint, regardless of what it may be.

    Light God Slayer Magic allows its user to transform the physiology of their body into that of a tainted archangel, allowing them to utilise a power that can be used to eradicate Gods. The light produced from this magic has a black tint to it, surrounding a bright interior. Consequently, this Magic allows the user to both produce and control this light from any part of their body, which can be used in both close and ranged combat, or in order to increase the mage's own effectiveness in battle. The user can also manipulate and control, to an extent, light from natural sources, and can eat any light in order to regain strength, except the light that his own magic produces, or that of this magic's counterpart, the Light Demon Slayer magic.

    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} MMD53Gy

    D Rank- 2 perks
    C Rank- 3 perks
    B Rank - 4 perks
    A Rank - 5 perks
    S Rank - 6 perks
    L Rank - 7 perks
    X Rank - 9 perks
    Z Rank - 11 perks

    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} 9nY0v5X

    • It is an extremely versatile magic, it's uses ranging from offensive, to even supplementary, as the mage chooses.
    • This form of magic is strong against light magic/holy magic, and therefore is more effective when dealing with mages of such elemental affinities.
    • This magic allows the user to alter his physiology to that of an Archangel/God, and thus the user can eat "lower" forms of this element and is immune to this element of Light.


    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} KWvO0iy

    • The user cannot eat the Light generated by his own magic, or the light generated by a demon slayer.
    • This form of magic cannot be used for healing spells.
    • This magic has no other elemental advantages against other elements, and therefore the user does not have too many advantages when facing a mage not affiliated with light in any way. Light magic has an advantage against darkness magic at the cost of being weak to earth
    • The caster cannot utilise light from sources beyond 10m radius of him, therefore it limits him at large ranges.


    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} DafVp4X


    D-Rank:
    C-Rank:
    B-Rank:
    A-Rank:
    [spoiler=S-Rank][/7]
    L-Rank:
    X-Rank:
    Z-Rank:
    Ami~
    Ami~
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    Posts : 578

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    Post by Ami~ Sun Apr 03, 2016 9:10 am

    I'll break things down one by one. I thank you for bolding the d/cd since its sometimes hard for me to see and will regrade this magic shortly. However, I understand that they are touch based rage but sometimes, I still need a speed that they travel in. If not one could simply say as an example "the (attack) traveled at the speed of light an hit instantaneously". So that is the reason we request you to proved speed.
    Ray Ignazia wrote:Okay so, I had written the duration/cooldown and speed for a couple of spells, which you seemed to have overlooked. I bolded them below for you, so that shouldn't be an issue. Most spells you've asked me to write a speed for are at a touch based range, so, even with a D ranked spell it'll be less than a second. IMO it doesn't need a speed since it's not a projectile, or the spell in effect is not leaving my character's body in any way, but yeah, please help me understand what exactly you need. Everything else is edited as you wanted.

    Ray Ignazia wrote:
    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} IlBs0Ll


    Magic Name Here: Heaven God Slayer
    Element Here: Light
    Primary/Secondary: Primary
    Character Specific/Non-Character Specific Non-character specific. It is an ancient lost magic, which can either be learned from a turned god or a tome, or can be obtained through a lacrima.
    Offensive/Defensive/Supportive/Mixed: Mixed.


    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} IdcNoDK
    God Slayer Magic is a form of Ancient Spell in which the caster is able to attain the abilities of a "God", using a specific element as their type. The certain elemental type of God Slayer Magic can be conjured from the caster's body and be used for various purposes, mainly in combat. It is said that the original usage of this Magic was to slay "Gods". In addition, the color of each God Slayer's element has a black tint, regardless of what it may be.

    Light God Slayer Magic allows its user to transform the physiology of their body into that of a tainted archangel, allowing them to utilise a power that can be used to eradicate Gods. The light produced from this magic has a black tint to it, surrounding a bright interior. Consequently, this Magic allows the user to both produce and control this light from any part of their body, which can be used in both close and ranged combat, or in order to increase the mage's own effectiveness in battle. The user can also manipulate and control, to an extent, light from natural sources, and can eat any light in order to regain strength, except the light that his own magic produces, or that of this magic's counterpart, the Light Demon Slayer magic.

    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} MMD53Gy
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    D Rank- 2 perks
    C Rank- 3 perks
    B Rank - 4 perks
    A Rank - 5 perks
    S Rank - 6 perks
    L Rank - 7 perks
    X Rank - 9 perks
    Z Rank - 11 perks

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    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} 9nY0v5X

    • It is an extremely versatile magic, it's uses ranging from offensive, to even supplementary, as the mage chooses.
    • This form of magic is strong against light magic/holy magic, and therefore is more effective when dealing with mages of such elemental affinities.
    • This magic allows the user to alter his physiology to that of an Archangel/God, and thus the user can eat "lower" forms of this element and is immune to this element of Light.


    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} KWvO0iy

    • The user cannot eat the Light generated by his own magic, or the light generated by a demon slayer.
    • This form of magic cannot be used for healing spells.
    • This magic has no other elemental advantages against other elements, and therefore the user does not have too many advantages when facing a mage not affiliated with light in any way.
    • The caster cannot utilise light from sources beyond 10m radius of him, therefore it limits him at large ranges.


    Light (Heaven) God Slayer {Done} DafVp4X
    [size=32]

    D-Rank:
    C-Rank:
    B-Rank:
    A-Rank:
    [spoiler=S-Rank][/7]
    L-Rank:
    X-Rank:
    Z-Rank:
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    Post by Ray Ignazia Mon Apr 04, 2016 12:59 am

    Hi, I've edited all of those, and just to remind you, all cooldowns/durations/speeds are listed on the spell. Maybe it's because of the font that you're overlooking them, so I'm just stating it here so that you know they're there.
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    Post by Ami~ Mon Apr 04, 2016 6:16 pm

    Apollo: You can only raise physical damage by 0.5 points

    which deals 2 damage to anything it touches

    That's a no immediately. I'm afraid this spell is too OP, especially considering it lasts for 4 posts. If you wish however, this can raise your physical damage to one of an S rank or 1.5 damage for that amount of posts.

    After these edits you should be good.
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    Post by Ray Ignazia Wed Apr 13, 2016 10:48 pm

    Edited accordingly. Am I good now?
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    Post by Ami~ Fri Apr 15, 2016 9:45 am

    Heaven God's Vengance: Dimentions of the light? Also remember you can cause only 2 damage to one being per post
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    Post by Ray Ignazia Sat Apr 16, 2016 12:26 pm

    Done~
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